So I wrote a song... :D?

for my girlfriend and I wanted to see how you guys thought of the
lyrics before I made up the notes on guitar and put it up on youtube
so people please!! COMMENT ON IT :DDD

Oh and also needs a title!!!

Okay here it goes:

I look into those hazel eyes
And all I see if pain
I try to wipe your teas away
But you pull away
And it hurts me
You can't imagin how it hurts me
And I didn't get to say good-bye before you left for the summer
And it hurts me
You can't imagin how it hurts me
But i'll take this moment
If you see this
I just wanted to say...

If I don't live to see the autum leaves on the ground
Remember me
And forget our past fights the're in the pasy
Love me
And another thing, don't forget
If I perish
I LOVE YOU

So here I am writing this song
Nothin' better to do
2 AM still thinkin' of you
Get a shot of whisky
feel better
But what's that gunna do?
Remind me
If when
We got drunk
With our friends
Hangin' out
Havin' fun
Doesn't help me much
So i'm just gunna say